The two best almost-Haiku I've written so far are:
---------------- The ducks have guns now, they are sharp-shooting back. You are on their list. ---------------- This is ninja mouse, coming to kill you because you smell so cheesy. ---------------- From a technical point of view they're both 'almost-Haiku' as they do not mention a Season - unless you stretch the point and pretend the last one uses "cheesy seasoning"...groan...
Not sure what my fascination with murdering wildlife is all about. Hmmm.
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Heh heh.
The two best almost-Haiku I've written so far are:
----------------
The ducks have guns now,
they are sharp-shooting back.
You are on their list.
----------------
This is ninja mouse,
coming to kill you because
you smell so cheesy.
----------------
From a technical point of view they're both 'almost-Haiku' as they do not mention a Season - unless you stretch the point and pretend the last one uses "cheesy seasoning"...groan...
Not sure what my fascination with murdering wildlife is all about. Hmmm.
Re: Ducks
Is 5/6/5 still Haiku?
Oh, and someone should tell the T-shirt guy that the plural of haiku is haiku.
Oops.
5/6/5 is the new 5/7/5 seasonally adjusted post-credit crunch. :-)
Feel free to insert "all" at an appropriate position in the line.
Now, let me just go and look up that definition of ornery again...
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